Writers Craft
Annotative Bibliography
Divorce
Opposing Viewpoint on Divorce
This source is helpful and very fulfilling with questions, and opinions. It is article that asks questions, and gives tips about how divorce and separation usually are created over a long period of time. It also gives tips on how to understand and learn more about divorce/separation, and how average people can understand how to recognize when a relationship is going in the wrong direction. This source is useful for my investigative writing piece, which speaks about divorce, ways it can be noticed and avoided earlier than later.
http://www.cmha.ca/bins/content_page.asp?cid=2-70-72
This source is a perfect example of how small things can really save relationships. The article speaks about how help is sought by everyone at one point, and really it’s the best thing to do. Someone you trust and can speak with can really go a long way. This article would be a helpful insight into how divorce/separation can be avoided and conquered, with a strong and healthy mind, and an understanding mate.
http://newlyweds.about.com/od/gettingalong/a/avoiddivorce.htm
This article speaks about how divorce can be avoided in order to save a family, and recognize everyone involved, and affected. The relationship with the kids, and work may be something to much to handle, but at the end of the day it’s what being with your family that matters. It also writes how sexual intercourse between every relationship is healthy, and much needed. This is a very interesting look, and benefit article for couples to read and observe, to create the most positive environment for the family.
http://www.suite101.com/content/living-the-happy-home-life-a105188
4) This source is a short invitation to vent out a perspective to couples who might be a little desperate. It speaks of how venting emotions, and just finding a place to scream is something you might need from time to time. Another big topic is offering, and trying to make small changes in order to better the relationship. It also speaks on how studies have shown that among the top ten reasons for divorce is sexual. This article tends to show some supporting sentences, at the same time the article doesn’t seem to be very intent and specific, on many ideas or helpful hints.
http://hubpages.com/hub/How-to-avoid-divorce-1
5) This article speaks about how marriage is a common occurrence, and occurs with small instances of intentional small irritating things. It also speaks on how small things can be small and not expressed for some time, and can cause small and long controversial experiences for the entire marriage. If one of the spouses can take the initial responsibility, it can in turn help in a large way. This source is small, but covers some very interesting opinions, and is quite helpful.
http://ezinearticles.com/?Saving-Your-Marriage---Divorce-Avoidance-With-Common-Sense&id=2247079
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Writers Craft - Blog - Love Like the Ocean
Writers Craft
Love Like the Ocean
Blog Post
This story is very grasping and verbally visual, and paints a picture with almost eevry sentence.
“On the nightstand, the clock-face has a badly painted Elvis caught in mid-gyrate.” This sentence paints a great picture, and molds a visual bubble of what the room might include, with the nightstand hardly noticed behind a room of toys and junk.
“The crows are tiny black dots against a faded denim sky. In the distance, I hear a speedboat. For the last week I have been dreaming about the ocean-lapping softly against the hull of the boat, hissing as it rolls gravel up a beach, ocean swells hammering the shore.” This little section is very interesting and gives a great picture into what the dreams and thoughts of the ocean are so riveting and inspiring to his feelings out at sea.
“The fog and clouds smeared the lines between land and sea and sky. He faded in and out of view as the fog rolled by. He wore the same clothes he’d had on the day he left, a red plaid shirt, black jeans and the John Deere baseball cap Dad had given him.” This scene describes landscape of the scene and how it enhances the character personality, with describing what he see’s in his dreams, and how his dreams seem to describe everything to a dime.
These passages from the story may not have a dramatic effect on the story, but it shows the detail, and sets the tone for every scene.
Love Like the Ocean
Blog Post
This story is very grasping and verbally visual, and paints a picture with almost eevry sentence.
“On the nightstand, the clock-face has a badly painted Elvis caught in mid-gyrate.” This sentence paints a great picture, and molds a visual bubble of what the room might include, with the nightstand hardly noticed behind a room of toys and junk.
“The crows are tiny black dots against a faded denim sky. In the distance, I hear a speedboat. For the last week I have been dreaming about the ocean-lapping softly against the hull of the boat, hissing as it rolls gravel up a beach, ocean swells hammering the shore.” This little section is very interesting and gives a great picture into what the dreams and thoughts of the ocean are so riveting and inspiring to his feelings out at sea.
“The fog and clouds smeared the lines between land and sea and sky. He faded in and out of view as the fog rolled by. He wore the same clothes he’d had on the day he left, a red plaid shirt, black jeans and the John Deere baseball cap Dad had given him.” This scene describes landscape of the scene and how it enhances the character personality, with describing what he see’s in his dreams, and how his dreams seem to describe everything to a dime.
These passages from the story may not have a dramatic effect on the story, but it shows the detail, and sets the tone for every scene.
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